Review Detail of IINeeRoII in Harry Potter and the Fractured Dragon

Nothing to say about the grammar and the syntax of the sentences, there are errors but they are really unimportant. On the other hand, I am surprised by the author's dedication to reducing the chapters, to facilitate reading, it is a task that requires work and time, for that reason it is appreciated. Personally, I had left it since the slowness with which it progressed was tedious, but now I think an opportunity would not hurt. (Google translate)