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Review Detail of Riceballs_25 in Versatile System Online

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I don't get what the big deal is with having a system with personality, it makes the plot more interesting and adds depth to the main character as his interactions develop. Anyhow, the story has a great first chapter and so far there's nothing I have to complain about, I just hope that Ray becomes more assertive as the chapters progress. The flow of the story is smooth after a round of flawless editing, and the plot is fast paced. I would recommend this for readers looking for a derailed explanation on how systems work. Be warned, this story is addictive

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