Review Detail of Syler_Blade in Versatile System Online
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126 chapter review!!! Warning, possible spoilers!!! First things first, I would like to point out that “overall” the author has done a pretty decent job with this novel and hope he/she continues what they started. With that being said, I have compliled a small list of pros and cons as of chapter 126. Pros: + The writing, for the most part, is fairly well done. + The auther is has been uploading chapters regularly(roughly 5 or so chapters a week at the time of writing this). + So far the story has not stalled and has continued to move forward towards the issues as stated in the summery of the book. + The “World background” foundation is laid and definitely should be able to provide quite a bit of material for the author to build off of. + Starting at around chapter 100ish the auther starts to build the other minor character backgrounds, which I feel helps to add value to the book. CONS: (As with all webnovels, there are flaws and minor issue but I will only list the two biggest ones I see so far.) - So far 0% romance and/or harem at all. This may not be a con to everyone but the book has the “romance” and “harem” tags and it kinda feels like a lie when it seems like 150+ chapters could pass before romance is seen at all. I will say that there has been small hints of interest from possible heroines. - Character development. This is a big one for me. Sure the mc has grown physically more powerful using the system but as a person he has not grown at all. And to make matters worse, there is a huge disconnect between who he is internally and who he is externally. He is needy and childlike with his thoughts and with the system; while at the same time, somehow, he’s an above average, powerful team leader that orders others around like an experienced veteran that has all the answers. Everyone has that thing that bothers them when reading and this is mine, it has made me put the book down mid chapter before and not finish till the next day. Hope this helps potential readers to make a decision, and overall I think it’s a good book with the potential to be a great one depending on character development and how the author handles the harem issue(when it comes).
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Hello!! First of all, I would thank you for your honest review. It helped me get some insights about the book that I should look into and take care of. Also, regarding the issue that you have mentioned about character building, I am aware of it and currently working on it. As for the harem and romance issue, I am also working on it. It's just that when I started writing the novel, I didn't look too deeply into it but as I wrote more and more, I got aware of the situation. So right now, I am working on these two issues as I have many ideas about the main character having love interests and I would add them when the final arc of the first Volume starts. Other than that, I hope you have enjoyed the novel so far and you will continue reading it till the end. I hope you have a good day!! [img=recommend]
Just take note that you don’t create an mc with a saviour or hero complex, they are a real turn off especially for experienced readers, otherwise as long as you continue to improve and accept constructive criticism then this novel will go far. 🍺
PRO_GAMER_2345:Hello!! First of all, I would thank you for your honest review. It helped me get some insights about the book that I should look into and take care of. Also, regarding the issue that you have mentioned about character building, I am aware of it and currently working on it. As for the harem and romance issue, I am also working on it. It's just that when I started writing the novel, I didn't look too deeply into it but as I wrote more and more, I got aware of the situation. So right now, I am working on these two issues as I have many ideas about the main character having love interests and I would add them when the final arc of the first Volume starts. Other than that, I hope you have enjoyed the novel so far and you will continue reading it till the end. I hope you have a good day!! [img=recommend]
You are right. To be honest, I did make this mistake in the start as the mc became a bit too good and heroic. But slowly, I am changing him to become someone darker with the will to only care for those whom he loves. Also, the mc will go on a very darker path later on. Lastly, thanks a lot for your input. helps me by a lot .
Pro_Dave:Just take note that you don’t create an mc with a saviour or hero complex, they are a real turn off especially for experienced readers, otherwise as long as you continue to improve and accept constructive criticism then this novel will go far. 🍺
PRO_GAMER_2345:Hello!! First of all, I would thank you for your honest review. It helped me get some insights about the book that I should look into and take care of. Also, regarding the issue that you have mentioned about character building, I am aware of it and currently working on it. As for the harem and romance issue, I am also working on it. It's just that when I started writing the novel, I didn't look too deeply into it but as I wrote more and more, I got aware of the situation. So right now, I am working on these two issues as I have many ideas about the main character having love interests and I would add them when the final arc of the first Volume starts. Other than that, I hope you have enjoyed the novel so far and you will continue reading it till the end. I hope you have a good day!! [img=recommend]
Also, I am thinking of some😻 too. It will all be fun but I will add this after the first Volume ends.
Sinful_Cyanide:Sounds like fun to me!
PRO_GAMER_2345:Also, I am thinking of some😻 too. It will all be fun but I will add this after the first Volume ends.
I was, new chapter coming out tomorrow. With that I will be regular, had some problems at home but now all is solved
Eternal_Shu:author arebyou on hiatus??