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Dark_knight234
Dark_knight234Lv131yrDark_knight234

nice story by the way a really great read the beginning is lacking behind a little but it only gets better from there I'm surprised the novel has only 3 votes if recommend this novel any day good work author

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PRO_GAMER_2345
PRO_GAMER_2345AuthorPRO_GAMER_2345

Thanks for your review, the thing about the beginning is that I needed to slowly explain the world and take the story up from there. That's why it feels lacking.

JRCaste
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hey there Author, I see the tags and I assume your novel is a Harem? right?

PRO_GAMER_2345:Thanks for your review, the thing about the beginning is that I needed to slowly explain the world and take the story up from there. That's why it feels lacking.
PRO_GAMER_2345
PRO_GAMER_2345AuthorPRO_GAMER_2345

Yes it is a harem but not too big. Four or five women. Also, I will make it slowly as the story progresses. I would not be putting with women here and there and calling it a harem.

JRCaste:hey there Author, I see the tags and I assume your novel is a Harem? right?