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Review Detail of Majer3 in The Last Werewolf (Silver Blood)

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This following review has been published by Wise Entities Sect Academy (a writer community). https://wise-entities-padoga.webnode.page/sect-academia/ Okay, The Last Werewolf dam dam daaaa da. Dam dam dam daaa da. Why I have this classical piece in my head now. -O damn I should of picked the other novel its teen tagged/5 -Synopsis, family tries to think the best of problematic children and they act up and try go call police even parenting success 0/5. -Could use prologue for world info dump purposes. -Action action action, who is this jack guy now/5 where are we now where we left the woman? -When the painfully lame teen experiences and problems meet the overly tedious parents 1/5 xD -That being said the dialogue, feelings and this genre basics are good. Just world building would need a lot and scenarios, where everything happens and its difficult because in between the dialogue people have to watch something and see something. Jack opened the door to apologise parents for what he had done. But he was met with the gazes of two frightened parents with sex toys on the blank floor and another was dressed as pumpkin and other as a carrot, you can guess who is who. The leather harness and mouth balls were too much for Jack and he hesitantly and slowly close the sturdy oak door to clean his eyes from the travesty. Jack went to his room and cried and contemplated cutting himself with spoon. That’s drama xD

The Last Werewolf (Silver Blood)

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