Review Detail of KwimsonXL in The Oddity Among Preservers

Author here! I'm just a young writer doing this as a hobby, but i'll do my best do deliver a quality story. I love things like Kamen Rider and Power Rangers, and tokusetsu in general. Hope said appreciation for the genre shines through. Grammer wise, I'd say that isn't a real issue. Though, if I am to give any critique, I will say that the story might be a bit slow in the beginning (first 3 chapters) but it'll definitely pick up! Any feedback is appreciated.