Review Detail of DaoistNotAvilable in Enchanted - Echoing Souls

Item: Enchanted - Echoing Souls
Rating: 4.8

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DaoistNotAvilableLv11yrDaoistNotAvilable

I personally find the detailing a bit too heavy, but love the storyline. the characters are well defined, and sequences well spaced. would love to see more chapters. Good work.

Enchanted - Echoing Souls

Vishakha_Pagare

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Vishakha_PagareAuthorVishakha_Pagare

Hii thank you so much for your review, can you please tell me how can I improve the detailing? I am glad that you found the time to review my book. I would appreciate your feedback. Thank you so much

1yr

DaoistNotAvilableLv1DaoistNotAvilable

You could try breaking down the paragraphs. Too many lines visually seem a lot for a reader. Also, there are a lot of different situations taking place in one chapter. Try separating the different segments with a line or something. For the reader it will become clearer, otherwise I was a bit confused when I read from one segment to another and suddenly couldn't connect. But really good start.

Vishakha_Pagare:Hii thank you so much for your review, can you please tell me how can I improve the detailing? I am glad that you found the time to review my book. I would appreciate your feedback. Thank you so much

1yr

Vishakha_PagareAuthorVishakha_Pagare

Thank you so much. I will keep that in mind and do that.[img=recommend]

DaoistNotAvilable:You could try breaking down the paragraphs. Too many lines visually seem a lot for a reader. Also, there are a lot of different situations taking place in one chapter. Try separating the different segments with a line or something. For the reader it will become clearer, otherwise I was a bit confused when I read from one segment to another and suddenly couldn't connect. But really good start.

1yr