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This is definitely not the best there is on this site. Grammar is horrible, sentences are weird and the plot feels really, really off. The author clearly tries to get somewhere but I can't see it, I guess we can only wait and see for improvement.
I will become the ice jellyfish queen with the Chat Group(Dropped)
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Ah, I wasn't trying to be purposely hurtful? It was more of brutal honesty, I can see you're still improving so this is more or less a placeholder for this work as of now. Just do your best and sorry if it seemed like i was trying to discourage you, I know how hard it is to start writing and I have respect for everyone who actually puts effort into their words. -Sincerely Lotus.
m_42:will I'm doing the best I could for the grammar
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Not_A_Nenuphar:Ah, I wasn't trying to be purposely hurtful? It was more of brutal honesty, I can see you're still improving so this is more or less a placeholder for this work as of now. Just do your best and sorry if it seemed like i was trying to discourage you, I know how hard it is to start writing and I have respect for everyone who actually puts effort into their words. -Sincerely Lotus.
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