The story in general is quite good, with decent pacing and character development. However it sometimes feels repetitive with almost the exact same sequence of events almost being copied and pasted between story arcs. The MC is generally written well but sometimes there can be points where he seems stupid. In general the side characters seem to be given some development also, which is good to see rather than them just appearing for two chapters and the gone from all existence in the story.The only major criticism I have is the upload continuity of the author as initially the story was uploaded 2 chapters daily, then it dropped to 2 every other day then had a large absence, tho I believe this was due to the author's health. Now we have been without a release for a prolonged time again so I would encourage patients if you want to read this story.
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