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MITCHIEWilliams
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I loved how the book started. The book felt quite familiar with biblical stories in the beginning but as I read I discovered it was something different. I love how the story is a play on humanity. From the first king to the religious references. I like books with deeper meanings and this is a book filled with those The plot is very unique. This book is worth the read.

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Academy Artesan Procreation

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Hallelujah! I would appreciate if you help me make a decision. 1. The book deals with the theme of antiheroes: The model "anti" is King Saul. And the good model is the soldier: David. Should I keep writing about David, as King? 2. Enter with another character, as a prequel. Abraham / Abraham. 4. Start another contest: WPC #312 / WSA 2022, with this same trend of heroes / anti-heroes: biblical. We are forming a book club. To train moderators for our novels. Discord Server: GenX #9340

MITCHIEWilliams
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I think going on with King David is good since he has a lot of stories that can be added to the plot. it would be good if you could touch on his mistakes towards the end. it will make him feel real. You can use Abraham and Isaac's story as the prequel. As for the WSA competition, I think you should use an original story because to qualify for the competition you need to be contracted and to get a contract your book must be an original.

GenXPrays:Hallelujah! I would appreciate if you help me make a decision. 1. The book deals with the theme of antiheroes: The model "anti" is King Saul. And the good model is the soldier: David. Should I keep writing about David, as King? 2. Enter with another character, as a prequel. Abraham / Abraham. 4. Start another contest: WPC #312 / WSA 2022, with this same trend of heroes / anti-heroes: biblical. We are forming a book club. To train moderators for our novels. Discord Server: GenX #9340
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1.880 / 5.000 Resultados de traducción Answers 1/3 1. Actually David's mistakes, as King: they are what prompted me to write the novel; but, I ended up finding errors from the environment: Saul, Parents, Brothers, Community. David remained: as an interpersonal-social hero, and Saul as the family-social and kingdom antihero. And about: mentioning David's mistakes as King -towards the end-; (Make it feel real) (this would be for another WPC #312 contest Taming demons of a King, tainted?) Did you notice the theme of "Contamination of clothes/flesh, when putting on Saul's armor" Jude 1: 22-23 in Volume 5 : Arc 5: The era of existential emptiness. (Malaq) Chap. 16. What are your clothes contaminated with? In the Sermon Outline, the focus was on using the book of Malachi. But it wasn't very contextual. Please comment: This idea: WPC #312 - Male? As for continuing, writing the novel Academy Artesan Procreation. I will continue to the political issue. Well, human errors are seen: from the first politician, king, ruler. (1) How does he use, abandon and suppress his own family and his subjects? Of course he does it devilishly. From there all the kings/government errors would be seen. And you know the list is long! (2) The Creator told the prophet about the evils that the ruler or king would do, because "man" had rejected the divine government. Say: That I am very blessed with your dialogue, please, I pray to God: allow you to continue with the dialogue. Peace to your lives. From what city, country do you communicate? Are you a mission/church leader? Do you know how to use this novel / and this medium: Webnovel to evangelize/teach, biblical themes?

MITCHIEWilliams:I think going on with King David is good since he has a lot of stories that can be added to the plot. it would be good if you could touch on his mistakes towards the end. it will make him feel real. You can use Abraham and Isaac's story as the prequel. As for the WSA competition, I think you should use an original story because to qualify for the competition you need to be contracted and to get a contract your book must be an original.
MITCHIEWilliams
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You should go for it since you already have the plot set. I am not a minister and I stay in Nigeria.

GenXPrays:1.880 / 5.000 Resultados de traducción Answers 1/3 1. Actually David's mistakes, as King: they are what prompted me to write the novel; but, I ended up finding errors from the environment: Saul, Parents, Brothers, Community. David remained: as an interpersonal-social hero, and Saul as the family-social and kingdom antihero. And about: mentioning David's mistakes as King -towards the end-; (Make it feel real) (this would be for another WPC #312 contest Taming demons of a King, tainted?) Did you notice the theme of "Contamination of clothes/flesh, when putting on Saul's armor" Jude 1: 22-23 in Volume 5 : Arc 5: The era of existential emptiness. (Malaq) Chap. 16. What are your clothes contaminated with? In the Sermon Outline, the focus was on using the book of Malachi. But it wasn't very contextual. Please comment: This idea: WPC #312 - Male? As for continuing, writing the novel Academy Artesan Procreation. I will continue to the political issue. Well, human errors are seen: from the first politician, king, ruler. (1) How does he use, abandon and suppress his own family and his subjects? Of course he does it devilishly. From there all the kings/government errors would be seen. And you know the list is long! (2) The Creator told the prophet about the evils that the ruler or king would do, because "man" had rejected the divine government. Say: That I am very blessed with your dialogue, please, I pray to God: allow you to continue with the dialogue. Peace to your lives. From what city, country do you communicate? Are you a mission/church leader? Do you know how to use this novel / and this medium: Webnovel to evangelize/teach, biblical themes?