Review Detail of Psan in ttdbdhfg
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Awesome... but i expect more lemons... and more detailed and longer. The grammar is above average. At least compared to all the badly written novels. Also i expect the author to make up more stuff... like introducing more of the world, new enemies, etc. Like the glasses dude. He is in contract with a demon... defeat said demon. Find out where the monsters come from. I suspect a portal. Defeat them. Recover the conquered dark elf lands, etc. Mc must make use of his earth and advanced knolwedge to improve all aspects. Like making soap. Introducing stuff. And then have şêx until the girls cant stand. More lemons.
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And yes, I don't care at all that I write about the hentai universe. It doesn't affect how much lemon there should be in MY story at all. First of all, because it is mine, and not someone else's.
Fellbane:He’s right, you know. Kuroinu is a hentaî world and obviously that is part of the reason we are reading this fanfic. You should include more lemons.
He’s right, you know. Kuroinu is a hentaî world and obviously that is part of the reason we are reading this fanfic. You should include more lemons.
ghnfgyighk:Pervet!!!! :3
Fellbane:He’s right, you know. Kuroinu is a hentaî world and obviously that is part of the reason we are reading this fanfic. You should include more lemons.