Review Detail of Psan in ttdbdhfg
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Awesome... but i expect more lemons... and more detailed and longer. The grammar is above average. At least compared to all the badly written novels. Also i expect the author to make up more stuff... like introducing more of the world, new enemies, etc. Like the glasses dude. He is in contract with a demon... defeat said demon. Find out where the monsters come from. I suspect a portal. Defeat them. Recover the conquered dark elf lands, etc. Mc must make use of his earth and advanced knolwedge to improve all aspects. Like making soap. Introducing stuff. And then have şêx until the girls cant stand. More lemons.
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I will add lemon only in those moments where it will be appropriate. I'm not going to sacrifice the plot for the sake of stupid fucking. In my fan-fic, there is exactly as much lemon as it needs. If you're looking for a simple porn story, you've clearly gone the wrong way.
Fellbane:He’s right, you know. Kuroinu is a hentaî world and obviously that is part of the reason we are reading this fanfic. You should include more lemons.
He’s right, you know. Kuroinu is a hentaî world and obviously that is part of the reason we are reading this fanfic. You should include more lemons.
ghnfgyighk:Pervet!!!! :3
Fellbane:He’s right, you know. Kuroinu is a hentaî world and obviously that is part of the reason we are reading this fanfic. You should include more lemons.