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I got be honest, this is a great book. I just noticed a few things and wanted to clear them out. I didn't mean to offend the author or something, I just noticed them. -- Writing Quality: 4/5 Reason: There were too much POV in just a chapter and the transitions are not that smooth. I got confused for a second and need to re-read the whole chapter to understand what was happening. SoU: 5/5 Reason: Author updates daily and that's a good thing. Especially for someone like me who loves to binge read books on this platform. SD: 5/5 Reason: Straight to the point type of books and then slowing it down till the end. Good start, not gonna lie. CD: 4/5 Reason: I still don't know and couldn't imagine what the characters look like. I didn't even know which one is the MC from the first chapter. Maybe a dumb reasoning since synopsis exist and I could just read from there, however, introducing the MC in the first chap would also be helpful. WB: 5/5 Reason: Great WB, just a little more tweaks on what the bg was. Or a little description on the surroundings will also be a good thing. Overall: 4.6/5 Reason: Great book. Good plot. Just a few things to edit here and there. The cover looks also cool so I will be hoping that when this book have more chapters, it will be a good one as well. -- Kudos to the author who wrote this. This looks like it will have a really good potential on being one of the greats. Good luck!

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Oh, I'm not offended, I like the feedback. I like that you have noticed the hood sides and have also pointed out the bad sides. You are helping to improve my writing. I will improve on everything you have mentioned and I will try to not repeat them. The POV switching will be minimized and rationalized so confusion can be avoided. Thanks for reading my novel, giving this helpful review and sending Power stones. I'll be forever grateful to you for your kindness.