The mc is incredibly stupid impulsive and acts like a child even tho he was a man before reincarnation I think the people of this world have a collective 5 brain cells every demon can create more demons apparently which is confusing cuz why isn't everyone a demon the mc a the worst part it's just incredibly hard to read what he's doing and not think he was born with a brain defect beside the stupid characters everything else is good but this isn't really a fanfic to be honest it's different compared to the original
sucroseliker
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LIKEOK your book is pretty good it's just I don't really get why the mc does the things he do anyway keep up the good work and I'm sorry if my review was overly negative:)
sucroseliker:yea you're completely right about the demon thing. I did that for a reason tho. Also your pfp is funny lol
John_Ryan_8278:OK your book is pretty good it's just I don't really get why the mc does the things he do anyway keep up the good work and I'm sorry if my review was overly negative:)