Review Detail of LeakingAmps in You Might Die If I Cast My Healing Spell

Story has a good premise, but the writing needs some work. The transition (at least for the first good bit) is very rough, at times contradicting itself, or not making sense. The pacing is wildly inconsistent as well, which makes following along a bit difficult. Lots of unnecessary repetition and/or rewording of information, sometimes for entire chapters. Main character is supposed to be very smart, but does some really stupid things, such as throwing away all his advantages (stealth, range, first attack) to rule-of-cool the boss instead. If you can read though this (and ignore some bizarre world building choices) it looks like it could be fun.