Review Detail of Daoist266256 in Innocent Overlord In Highschool DxD [DroCompleted]
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I think it would be a good story if you can correct the capital letters and grammer mistakes but I have to say the story line is interesting but why every 10 sentences do descibe the MC’s beauty?
Innocent Overlord In Highschool DxD [DroCompleted]
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Thank you for replying it but can ı ask a question. In the title it says innocent overlord so do you plan on making him like ophis (you know powerful, innocent and like a child) because ı have seen many (not that much but you get it) fics like this but after the chapter 10 it becames this “ I was innocent and naive but my ……(important person) died and now ı must become the most powerful being alive” and the mc becames a egdy power hungry man. (And also sorry ing is not my first language)
tiko_tiko:i will improve and The reason behind the Beauty thingy is To remind you how good looking he is cause next chapters will heavily need it :3 even when canon starts but I'll do it less from now on
don't worry about it English is Also my third language and If you have read to current chapters you can tell Hex's life will never like this .... If it's get boring then that's not Hextorias Ceresc Bael
Daoist266256:Thank you for replying it but can ı ask a question. In the title it says innocent overlord so do you plan on making him like ophis (you know powerful, innocent and like a child) because ı have seen many (not that much but you get it) fics like this but after the chapter 10 it becames this “ I was innocent and naive but my ……(important person) died and now ı must become the most powerful being alive” and the mc becames a egdy power hungry man. (And also sorry ing is not my first language)