sorry to say this bro because i hate to be a bad guy. but your story pace is so slow and fighting is too slow and prolonged i feel like MC and every good guy is stupid and idiot beyond reason. you may enjoy a long and winding and slow and very very delayed battle but i sure not enjoy it. . i give honest star review at least, but for now i dropping your story for good
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