Review Detail of nebula in I Received System to Become Dragonborn
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Im not sure if I'm qualified to be reviewing this, having only read the 40 free chapters, but I need to write reviews for my badge so here goes anyway. This book has potential. Or at least it did up until I stopped. The problem came with consistent boughts of contradictory statements by both characters and author, as well as these characters having personalities I would never believe to exist even if they were in my most realistic dreams(leading to a 2-star for character development). For one the MC and his military buddies have fought together for 5 years and yet he still acts like a complete idiot when it comes to anything to do with fighting, be it technique, tactics, mentality, discipline, or anything else. And by idiot, I don't mean average civilian idiot- I mean worse than probably 80 percent of the general population. And then there's the dementia. Why does everyone just forget everything? The MC even forgot to do his daily quests!! His only true way to get stronger, which is the best way to solve all of his problems up until now!! Not up to date, so updating stability is 5 stars. World background is nothing special, but decently well executed up to paid chapters start. I think that's all I want to say. If I want to add anything I'll reply to this review.
I Received System to Become Dragonborn
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first of all, thanks for the review. :) They actually don't have any real military training. Cause they are just drafted by force from the Slums. They just need to be there to shoot elves. For anything else, I would not argue if you don't like it.
nebula:Paragraph 3, when referring to the daily quests being his best way to get stronger: "They are his...."*
No problem, reading my review back it looks a bit overly harsh tbh. Just writing anything in the first place is infinitely more than I've ever done, and should be seriously commended. If anyone sees this, they shouldn't take it as "oh no this book is bad I shouldn't read it", but just use it as a data point to come to their own conclusion. Read the book. It's free after all. Then decide whether it's worth continuing. Worst case scenario, you get to add more time on to your reading time stat
Diyen_Pi:first of all, thanks for the review. :) They actually don't have any real military training. Cause they are just drafted by force from the Slums. They just need to be there to shoot elves. For anything else, I would not argue if you don't like it.