Review Detail of FennrrirX in Return from another world (Dxd)

It might have been a great novel if the English weren't too hard to understand. I usually try not to judge the quality of work by the author's mastery of grammar, especially since this is not my first language either, but that can only be the case when it's possible to make sense of what I am reading. I hope the author can find someone to help edit this because both the premise and the ideas seem quite interesting. All that the story lacks is the ability to transmit information in an easily absorbable way. Overall I would recommend it for those that are used to mtl and can force themselves to understand the text even when it is hard to piece things together. Thank you for the attention and have a nice day.