Review Detail of etkowatches in Divine Wars

reviewing at 19 chapters Overview: a story about a man who died and became the god of a fledgling multiverse. I think it is quite good. I find the ideas so far to be very good and relatively creative. If the author chooses to continue writing this book and improving I have no doubt this will be a top 15. Pros: A lot of different directions the story could go aka a lot of potential genuinely fun to read especially since the mc has a split personality so even when he is alone it is entertaining to watch the squabbling. (the split personality is a plot device which is a guiding mc in his godhood, not a major plot point otherwise) Con: the writing quality is very inconsistent. at times it is up to par with some top 15s but other times there is major typos/ grammar mistakes which confuse the reader to what is happening. It isn't to the point where it is unreadable but it is irritating and if you can't deal with it I would not blame you. This is something I hope the author will improve upon by double checking his/her work. Otherwise this is a book I would read for a thousand chapters and I would want nothing more than for the author to continue their work since it is a fun read with tons of potential.