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Review Detail of OSAYH1 in Classes after dark

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So this is an early review which I will likely delete and replace once this reaches 10 chapters. Likes: - The world, I really enjoyed the graveyard act idea - I can see some scope with the midterms so that's cool - The character's masks are very unique which I like - MC is pretty unique, not explicitly soft or edgy, which I like. Dislikes - This is less of a dislike and more of a neutral but the writing can be all around the place at least like it was in the second chapter. - Not many chapters, (of course this came out like a few days ago) - Chapter titles are pretty redundant Chapter 1: Graveyard Act: Part 1 You should remove the colon it's unneeded and just becomes clutter.

Classes after dark

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I'll work on that and also I changed the titles, thank you!