Review Detail of Pclerk in I am Invincible; Literally [One Punch Man in Marvel]
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Writing quality is decent. Not the best as some grammar and spelling errors are there, but really easy to read. The updates are not on a set or regular schedule. They come out with huge gaps between some and others really close. The story develops REALLY SLOWLY! Nothing has really happened… the time it takes One Punch Man to explain his back story is essentially all of the current 12 chapters. The story is literally a rip off of one punch with a marvel setting. Unique but lazy choice. The MC does not come off as a Saitama, more like a ghetto version. The other brief character appearances so far are basic. There isn’t much of a description for the world yet other than it’s marvel, most likely MCU… author needs to not repeat something’s as much. Will write something, write it again, and then for some reason write it a third time from a different characters view. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?
I am Invincible; Literally [One Punch Man in Marvel]
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Thanks for the review. About the updates, well I am kind of busy with life at the moment so I am unable to update this regularly. I still try to update this within a week so I think it's fine? I will update this regularly after September because I will be free after this month. About the story development, well this is only for the origin arc of this book. I kind of like to make the beginning of my story this long with different POVs because I don't want to leave anything out of it and I feel like that I am much better at writing character's POVs than 3rd person POV so I tend to do this a lot so I guess it's fine if you don't like that. The story will develop much faster from volume 2 which starts after ch-12. Now about the story being a rip off of one punch man with Marvel setting, I am going to assure you that it's much more than that. Currently it may seem like this because it only has 12 chapters at the moment but it's going to take a whole different turn of events in the future. I already confirmed in a comment that this story is based on the setting of MCU but I guess I will confirm this in the next chapter too. I am a new writer so I really appreciate you telling me about my mistakes like that, I will definitely try to better my writing styles in the future. POV change might take a lot of time though. Thank you for reading this book. Peace✌️