Review Detail of GODOFCAT in Lux Ortus Academy : The Gricius

Item: Lux Ortus Academy : The Gricius
Rating: 4.4

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GODOFCATLv21yrGODOFCAT

the author doesn't know what tenses he should use which is bad so decide what to use and stick with it I can see a lot of mistakes in the chapter but can be fixed try using a lot of showing than telling so try improving your grammar and description writing btw your storyline is interesting I mean really it's unique

Lux Ortus Academy : The Gricius

Ar7_Storm

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Ar7_StormAuthorAr7_Storm

Thanks anyway. 😁 I'll try to improve then. hahaha

1yr

Ar7_StormAuthorAr7_Storm

hmmm. Think i'm gonna use multiple tenses then. Since i notice that's the way i always wrote it down.

1yr

GODOFCATLv2GODOFCAT

no no no. you can only choose one tense you can even search it on YouTube just chose one

Ar7_Storm:hmmm. Think i'm gonna use multiple tenses then. Since i notice that's the way i always wrote it down.

1yr

Ar7_StormAuthorAr7_Storm

yeah. i just search it up. thanks anyway. Past tense then. hehehe

1yr