I’m on chapter 337. I love this story but it definitely has its annoying points that’s becoming more and more intolerable as I read. Her inability to do critical thinking, no sense of danger, both of these it seems she sometimes lacks just to for plot. Her obliviousness that seems on the level of a harem protagonist but not just about the women in her life but about everything. The reason I wrote this review is because on chapter 336, someone was obviously calling her beautiful, but she seems oblivious till the end where even a toddler would realize there talking about her. Another time is at her birthday, people was staring at her because of her beauty, but she wrote it off as some stupid reason I forgot. I love this story but these small things that keep showing up ruin the experience. She needs a character arc quick where she grows up and starts to realize that you can have fun in life without thinking that she is immortal and can’t die. She needs to experience helplessness and a reality check.
Draekai
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