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Review Detail of RkArnold in I Woke the Sick and Disabled Prince on Our Wedding Night

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I'm enjoying this book. at about chapter 250 the author makes a stupid mistake that makes me enjoy it less. the plot requires an addictive drug, and the author chose "hemp". you make rope out of hemp. it's related to marijuana and has some psychoactive components, but it's not addictive either and certainly doesn't kill people unless you hang them with a rope. the lack of basic research by the author makes it hard to suspend my disbelief and hope this episode passes soon. the author would have done better to choose something like cocoa leaf which can do all the things needed for the story line. other than this big gaping hole in the story it's been a fun read, but not a serious one. I Can ignore the stupid little things, but when it drives the whole plot it's distractingly stupid. overall the writing is good and I Like the characters and their development, pei gan and aunt luo are well developed side characters that are fully three dimensional. I think this author can be awesome with some judicious editing to remove or correct certain bad choices in the plot development.

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