To be honest ...the flow of the story seemed fast yet at a good pace. There are some words here and there that are misspelled and some words I am unfamiliar with(like Sylphear is a god I have never heard of... unlike undine or Garuda whom I am familiar with). But if I have to say...they are not a big flaw at all since this story sucked me into it so much more than I expected it to. It was a really fun read
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