Review Detail of PerditaTritonia in MISTAKE..

From what I've read, the story has a youthful, easy going vibe to it. The story progresses rather nicely. Pace of the story is just right. A few spelling errors here and there, but I know the Author can easily remedy this once the Author has time. I love how the flow of the story is rather smooth. No abrupt cliff hangers. Each chapter is just the right length; not too long, not too short. Overall, this story has potential! Let's just give the Author some time to iron our her story.