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Good premise, nothing like a good old revenge story after regressing. Author is good at conveying emotions through text and although use of Capital letters and grammar could improve a little bit, it doesn't retract from the story. The only thing not giving this 5 stars is the power system that I don't quite understand yet. Perhaps starting off small and gradually introducing power levels as the MC increases in strength would fix this. All in all, great work. A few improvements needed but great nonetheless