i don't read a novel where the main charac. was a female but when i read this one.... sheeesh, i feel like i became a girl..lol .. just from the first chapter, you will suddenly self substitute to the novel, as if you were the MC.... but i suggest author try to read and edit your first chap because if you will... i admit that your novel can compete with top novels out there
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