Review Detail of DaoistfpMimj in The Dungeon Master System
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Honestly quite surprised about the number of reviews given the writing quality of this novel. Though I am only 10 chapters deep, the early game development was enough to commit further into the book. I'm impressed with the characters introduced thus far, as it also gave some insight how to monsters work. Good start author, looking forward to your future chapters and hopefully success. Though I am biased I do love a good dungeon master novel.
The Dungeon Master System
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Hmm well for me I'd like a little bit more detail on the traps. Other than that im good with your novel so far.
Done_With_It:Thanks for the reply! If you had to choose one thing, what would you like to see improved with the story? I want to make sure it's as good as I can make it, so I want to listen to everybody's feedback. I'll implement whatever advice you have as soon as I can.
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