There will be grammatical errors here, there, and everywhere, but they will easily go unnoticed if you focus on the story rather than on the words. The dialogue is fluid, the main character is somewhat self-aware, and the Author's word choices fit the characters' personalities. +1 for momentarily appeasing my never-ending hunger for nostalgia. I pray this story reaches its end in one piece, rising above the corpses of the countless fan-fictions that once were to join the ranks of the True Fan-fictions in Fanfic Olympus.
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