Review Detail of N0_Hope in DELETED/DROPPED…

Writing Quality : 2/5 Stability of Updates : 4/5 Story Development : 2/5 Character Design : 3/5 World Background : 2/5 The grammar is quite bad. There is a lot of errors and even then the way the MC " speaks " is just weird. Also the author used too much of " time skips " ... in one sentence he is one place and the next sentence he is already finished an entire chapter with just 10 words of resume ... I don't like when a fanfic cuts corners by saying ( like in the story.. ) or even not using that but just skipping chunks of info . I read 12 chapters and I can't continue . The story requires to be remade , polished and the grammar .. required a bit more effort . The story could be good but it's just too hurried .