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It's good btw. It's like a calming down that having tired reading a struggle mc books. Don't change personality of Mc. I like evil and ruthless mc. Don't make him a simp or perverted mc. Does Mc will travel other animes after tensura? I suggest One piece, naruto, hxh, or cultivation novels. I also suggest don't put too much sentences in one paragraph it's hurt to read you know, What I mean long paragraph. If paragraph are long enough transfer the next sentences to another paragraph. ☺️☺️