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Review Detail of EaCalibur in The Halberd of Berk

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EaCalibur
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Your idea was good but execution not so much. Honestly, it feels like i am reading about a side character instead of a protagonist..........

The Halberd of Berk

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TreacherousVoid
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That’s what I was saying! The MC is just following around hiccup and Astrid for no reason. He has no goals or even reason to be here. I wouldnt even know he was the MC if not explicitly told so.