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Review Detail of Pythia in The Halberd of Berk

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Pythia
PythiaLv21yrPythia

He can't even walk properly without an aid and yet the author wants him to use a halberd... A weapon that requires both hands, very sturdy stance (both legs need to in a position to compensate for the weapons weight) and needs high mobility in order to swing and stab, something he will never have again. "All muscle has been ripped from the bone." What a waste of potential for anyone with more than 2 brain cells. Your writing is good and interesting but decisions like that just hint towards idiotic logic and reasoning in the future of this novel. Good luck with the rest, i suggest you try and get some education on wider areas of the world.

The Halberd of Berk

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