Es entretenida la historia no tiene muchos errores y se lee muy bien me gusto el toque de monster hunter le queda a la historia espero ver como desarrollas el mundo en general las relaciones y las tramas que pueda tener en fin no dejes de escribir y no te desanimes con criticas destructivas
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LIKEi don't know. i never understood spanish people in this site. i mean everyone write in english then there are them who write in their language for some unknown reason, both as autors and comments
LulzLowKey:what did dude be saying?
WebReaderPub:i don't know. i never understood spanish people in this site. i mean everyone write in english then there are them who write in their language for some unknown reason, both as autors and comments