Review Detail of EdanKote in Drawing cards at Hogwarts
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English is not my language, I use this site to help me learn. Despite my poor command of the language I will try to write a review. I read 5 chapters before quitting. The characters do not act with logic. I don't know if there are many casinos in London, but for an 11 year old to walk in so easily is impossible. I even think that the author never went there. Even McGonagall's reaction is unnatural. There are plenty of other details that make me stop and I don't want to list them all here.
Drawing cards at Hogwarts
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Took me a while to realize this is Chinese fan fiction. This guy is just translating it, and editing it. That's why a lot of things didn't make sense. he had the MC fish in a pond and caught "Yellow Surgeonfish" a quick google search would tell you these fish are saltwater tropical fish fishes. which makes no sense considering the MC is somewhere in Britain.