Review Detail of Pclerk in MCU: Skull and Bones

Now that more of the story is out I can give an even better review. The writing quality is still very good from my first review and there are still stable updates… however after that the story is a little lack luster to me. Some will find it better but little details throw it off for me. Supposed high IQ… where? For a reincarnated person, only just learning to walk at 5 well enough to run around on your own and the diapers comment show a huge lack of that. The whole Thor bomb event makes zero sense. C4 would be closely monitored and it would be obvious what he did for shield and to Thor, resulting in a quick death… the event is good for a villain despite how short lived it would make him. The characters and world background kind of come right from the movies, leaving nothing for the authors own design except the MC who is really a true intellectually challenged juggernaut. The world building is terrible because everything is based off of movies/comics so if you have not read them, the descriptions tell you nothing to help any visualization of the story. All the plot holes and MC take away from the story for me. It will be a good read for others but it just leaves me bored and wanting. I can understand why some of the others say around 5 stars but not for me. I think the author can do better but this story would need a little rewriting for that.