Review Detail of MedTryglaw in True Slytherin

It seems to me that the author does not know the world he writes about. In fanfic, Draco dies of a brain tumor, but in JKR's world, Draco survived and had a son ... ok, a change from the original, but acceptable. In this magical world, electricity and electronics work ... change rather strange and not thought out by the author. Draco is 10-11 years old by letter correspondence with Gabrielle Delacour (3-4 years old). Overall, I see a lot of problems, but who knows ... maybe it will be better in the future.