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Review Detail of M0R1 in Brain Eater in the Apocalypse

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M0R1
M0R1Lv11yrM0R1

bro please improve on grammar and dont lie in the synopsis and also stop writing cringe...........................................................................................

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Brain Eater in the Apocalypse

TheAlpha

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TheAlpha
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If you are willing to specify, I’m all ears. It’s my first novel, and I want to improve as a writer in a whole👋 Appreciate the review!

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Javon_Nixon_9443Lv2Javon_Nixon_9443

The cringe is probably referring to pati’s fear of cockroaches and small bugs. As for the grammar, can’t really be specific because it’s an “overall” thing. Granted, your grammar isn’t the worse around but it can be improved.

TheAlpha:If you are willing to specify, I’m all ears. It’s my first novel, and I want to improve as a writer in a whole👋 Appreciate the review!
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