Review Detail of Moist_Yoda in I Am Not A Villain

I wanted to like this story, but reading it was painful because of how poorly this was written. I have read other stories with a really bad translation that still has a good story. Despite it having bad translation, this isn't one of them. this story feels like it was written by someone who never took any writing lessons or read a good book in their life. maybe this story gets better, but I'm not going to be paying to find out. I wish the author luck on his writing, and please go read some good books to improve your storytelling