Review Detail of zero_m in Global Killing: I Could Plunder Talent
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Really good story not much else to say as I don't feel like writing a whole long review but there is almost no mistakes in writing it is being updated continually the story goes at a good pace. the character is so far smart maybe a few slip ups and the world design is pretty easy to follow so 5 stars
Global Killing: I Could Plunder Talent
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So many mistakes in grammar and word usage. The one that I find the most annoying though is "exploding." Not exactly sure what word is intended to be used, but it doesn't fit the context in the least. Possibly "treasure."
zero_m:Sorry I mean I do read a lot of mtl and my brain auto translates the nonsense sometimes so I may have been off.
"Almost no mistakes in the writing" Have you read the book? I only made it 5 chapters in and could have posted dozens of edits to the writing. Bad grammar and poor word choices abound. Let's not forget that for a book about plundering talents, he doesn't even use them in the 2 fights he has in those 5 chapters. Before the first fight, he plundered 12 talents and then uses 2 of them in the first attack against the beast, then waits for it to get tired before killing it. All the while saying that he will use his talents and not fight head on with the beasts. Then after 3 days of killing and gathering more talents we see the MC in another battle and he doesn't even use a single talent. Also in this second battle the MC is multiple times stronger than the beast, but it is written like he is struggling against it. But there are no issues with this writing at all...
Sorry I mean I do read a lot of mtl and my brain auto translates the nonsense sometimes so I may have been off.
nvanattia:"Almost no mistakes in the writing" Have you read the book? I only made it 5 chapters in and could have posted dozens of edits to the writing. Bad grammar and poor word choices abound. Let's not forget that for a book about plundering talents, he doesn't even use them in the 2 fights he has in those 5 chapters. Before the first fight, he plundered 12 talents and then uses 2 of them in the first attack against the beast, then waits for it to get tired before killing it. All the while saying that he will use his talents and not fight head on with the beasts. Then after 3 days of killing and gathering more talents we see the MC in another battle and he doesn't even use a single talent. Also in this second battle the MC is multiple times stronger than the beast, but it is written like he is struggling against it. But there are no issues with this writing at all...
zero_m:Sorry I mean I do read a lot of mtl and my brain auto translates the nonsense sometimes so I may have been off.