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This is a great novel. I love how Edgar was always supportive and protective of Alessandra. Its good that Pricsilla came around, it's just a pity Timothy died, and because of that I'd think that some people from Edgar's army might not accept that, if only Timothy was just injured, that'd be more acceptable.Kate never came around, and still lived her life in a normal house with food and all. Well several days with Simon can't compare with a life Alessandra experienced in the Barrets house. She was scarred, but how do we know that she wasn't given a scar cream when she was at the royal doctor's house?! since she was treated there. also, Simon's property, money, and whatever he had should've been split equally between all of his victims families. I understand it doesn't equal to someone's life, but I find it unfair that Kate inherited all of that. I also dont accept Melanie, the woman just doesn't care, and never regretted despite knowing that Desmond will break Alessandra, still she just ran away, forgot the daughter she had, and instead raised someone else's son plus 2 daughters she gave birth to. At this point, Katrina was a better mother, she fought tooth and nail for her daughter, to give her everything, though I hate the woman for how she treated all the other people, I can't not recognize her actions towards her daughter.I wouldn't forgive Melanie, I also wouldn't be all nice and chatty with her 2 daughters. Yeah, the girls had nothing to do with their mother's actions, still I'd be cordial, but still keep my distance. I didn't like how Alessandra was forcing Edgar to accept her sister being her children's tutor. I'd be nice, might help them here and there a little, might encourage them to go for their dreams, but still kept a distance, I wouldn't promise smth like to be a tutor to my child. You don't even know how she will turn out to be as a turor, but with the promise, there is a possibility for future arguments, which I'd prefer to stay away from. I'm as petty as Edgar, I would never be able to talk to that mother, and accept her new family like there is nothing wrong. Because seeing the relationship my mother has with my sisters and vice versa, I'd feel myself as someone never cared for, forgotten, and not deserving to be loved. Maybe even fell myself being hated. Her mother's excuse doesn't work for me, 1st she married Desmond herself, 2nd if she didn't want the baby she should have just drank those herbs to keep herself from getting pregnant. For 17 years she didn't care about her daughter, and Alessandra should also just let it go and forget about her. That's why I think that sometimes Alessandra was contradicting herself, she said she wouldn't care about her mother if she didn't care about her, but why at the end it seemed like there was an opening for a reconciliation?! I also didn't like Rose's behavior, Edmund's actions towards his wife. I'd like to know what in the end happened to Sally and Caleb.All of these ⬆️ are just my frustration points. But all in all, this was a very good and enjoyable read. Ml and Fls interactions were full of tease, fun, and love.
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Hey! Thank you for the long detailed review. Kate's face didn't heal. She could only get the cream if Tobias allowed it since it is kind of property of the palace. Everyone isn't happy with Priscilla around, but they aren't going to take that out on Edgar. Alessandra was willing to try moving forward with her mother in the end, but Melanie never made an effort to do it since she still felt uncomfortable around Alessandra. Alessandra's sister did not become Eli's tutor right away. She had to go to school and prove herself which she did. Rose stayed the same and Edmund kept his lover away as promised. Hopefully, I didn't miss anything. I am thinking of doing a story about their daughter Penelope which would show more of how the family is and explain more of what happened with everyone, but I am not certain yet. Oh, for Simon. No one wanted to touch anything from him. Nothing from his house, his money, etc.
Thank you very much for clarification! I think pretty much yeah, you listed everyone and how they were. It’s a pity that Rose didn’t think about her grandson’s happiness, even though she mentioned internally that she would choose her happiness in marriage during one of her earlier conversations with Alessandra when they were in her town. And then she was like a whole different person, and with her asking about Alessandra’s mines’ jewels or gold, she seemed greedy to me, instead of a woman with a high status. And then she just went and blabbered about it, and Alessandra’s relatives lost peace they preferred to live in. It’s also understandable that none of the victims’ families wanted to have anything from Simon’s wealth. Of course, other than Kate. That’s such a relief that she did not receive the cream, she doesn’t deserve it. About writing about their daughter and all the others, that’d be wonderful. I think many of your readers will appreciate it since we are in love with your novel! [img=update][img=recommend][img=Loving it]
Violet_167:Hey! Thank you for the long detailed review. Kate's face didn't heal. She could only get the cream if Tobias allowed it since it is kind of property of the palace. Everyone isn't happy with Priscilla around, but they aren't going to take that out on Edgar. Alessandra was willing to try moving forward with her mother in the end, but Melanie never made an effort to do it since she still felt uncomfortable around Alessandra. Alessandra's sister did not become Eli's tutor right away. She had to go to school and prove herself which she did. Rose stayed the same and Edmund kept his lover away as promised. Hopefully, I didn't miss anything. I am thinking of doing a story about their daughter Penelope which would show more of how the family is and explain more of what happened with everyone, but I am not certain yet. Oh, for Simon. No one wanted to touch anything from him. Nothing from his house, his money, etc.
I will really think about their daughter's book. I had already named it "Dear Penelope". I've already started Hazel and Tobias so it would have to be after their story.
Daoist0MxuN6:Thank you very much for clarification! I think pretty much yeah, you listed everyone and how they were. It’s a pity that Rose didn’t think about her grandson’s happiness, even though she mentioned internally that she would choose her happiness in marriage during one of her earlier conversations with Alessandra when they were in her town. And then she was like a whole different person, and with her asking about Alessandra’s mines’ jewels or gold, she seemed greedy to me, instead of a woman with a high status. And then she just went and blabbered about it, and Alessandra’s relatives lost peace they preferred to live in. It’s also understandable that none of the victims’ families wanted to have anything from Simon’s wealth. Of course, other than Kate. That’s such a relief that she did not receive the cream, she doesn’t deserve it. About writing about their daughter and all the others, that’d be wonderful. I think many of your readers will appreciate it since we are in love with your novel! [img=update][img=recommend][img=Loving it]image
Violet_167:I will really think about their daughter's book. I had already named it "Dear Penelope". I've already started Hazel and Tobias so it would have to be after their story.