Review Detail of gusdefrog in SIGMA: The Rise of a New Era

Technically, I think the story is five star so far, given that usually my difficulty with time skips has nothing to do with their execution. The beginning chapter confused me a lot, but has also been irrelevant to the -five years ago- tale, so far. I presume that it is unfortunately where life is heading for the characters. My main complaints are mostly related to conflicts with my own definitions of concepts. Innocence never hides anything, because it doesn't know it should. That doesn't mean the naive girl trying to hide things is guilty of anything, but to me she has suffered far too much and been confined too much to be innocent. The 'main' character is a bully, and thinks that's okay as long as the person being picked on is expecting it? Umm... either I misunderstood, or I really hope he learns better along the way. He thinks about a lot of things, but he's very self centered in his thoughts so far. The compliments: Things are written pretty clearly, no confusion over the meanings of phrases or holes in the sentances, even when there are holes in the information the story provides. It's written well. I haven't once noticed a misspelling or structural problem to distract me from the story. And if those are there, then the flow of the story is pulling it along quite well. Luck in the rest of the tale, may comfortable days and peaceful hearts be obtained.