Review Detail of KING_IN_YELLOW in Kingdom: A Demon slayer
Review detail
This is disappointing cuz the way the author makes the dialog is sloppy and the characters feels robotic at times lie when he meet the king it feels robotic(?) the author tried to make the mc look like a some sort of genius by using basic deduction skill and common sense and making the other character feels dumb, "How dO yOu knoW I'm tHe KinG? umm by the fact you are getting hunted by a assassin has a guard and didn't even try to say you aren't the king when someone ask you?, don't take this review as a just harsh word cuz I'm just saying what i think is wrong with this fanfic in a rant-y way so forgive me if it hurt, also the other reviews literally gives no information about how good is the book or at least a hate review just 5 stars cuz it's a rare ff.
Kingdom: A Demon slayer
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nah i get it man, I'm still going o read this when an update come, so could watch you be a better writter, try to read some of cornbringer's books so you could get some idea how to properly form a dialog and all that. goodluck mate
Random_Name_7:I am sorry you feel this way. This is my first real fanfiction so I am still learning and improving.
I will look at those. If you are going to keep reading would you mind changing the review when you feel the quality improves because I respect other peoples opinions so I won't delete anything but I don't feel that it deserves 2 stars. Have a good day.
KING_IN_YELLOW:nah i get it man, I'm still going o read this when an update come, so could watch you be a better writter, try to read some of cornbringer's books so you could get some idea how to properly form a dialog and all that. goodluck mate
Random_Name_7:I will look at those. If you are going to keep reading would you mind changing the review when you feel the quality improves because I respect other peoples opinions so I won't delete anything but I don't feel that it deserves 2 stars. Have a good day.
Honestly you are very ambitious to right your first fanfic about "kingdom". It is by far one of the most big brain series I have ever read, all of the plans, strategies and characters are insanely good to the point that even now I never know who will win each individual battle... every single general in that series are playing 5D chess, the author must have a degree in historical warfare and have sun tzu's the art of war memorised from back to front. It is the living proof of "you need to BE a genius to write a genius mc" so good luck brave author đđ
Random_Name_7:I am sorry you feel this way. This is my first real fanfiction so I am still learning and improving.