Review Detail of Novelistilia in The Demon Vampire And His Mate

Hello, dear author. I must say I'm in love with your book! I can see that you really take your time to let the readers know our mc's world and that is so niceee. Maybe it would be better to separate long paragraphs. Or probably some commas. But overall, you've done a great job!! Keep on writing!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️