Review Detail of The_WindChaser in Magic Engineer System

The writing quality is superb! Good idea on having your story start in action. The only thing that somewhat irks me is there's too much description. Don't get me wrong, you have done well in describing the characters, and their looks. It definitely has potential. Look out for purple prose though since I did see it often as I read your work. Besides that, good job! It was kind of fun! Good luck!