Review Detail of axeltheeugene in Last Egg: Reincarnated as a Dragon in a Game

Okay so as of me writing my review, there’s currently only 13 chapters. So it’s still in it’s early stages, but so far everything is going great. The only real thing that the author might want to work on is their grammar, it’s not bad to the point were you can’t understand what’s going on. But it would help the flow of the story. Like I said nothing really big, just one tiny thing that the author could work on. But other then it’s a great read. And now it’s to the good parts of the story. Which the first being the pacing. Which so far isn’t to fast, but neither is it to slow. Second would be that the mc isn’t overpowered but is neither weak either. Which the first major battle being a great demonstration to what I mean (goblin chief). Thirdly there’s the background, which while it may not be anything new, it’s so far doing a great job on expanding the world building bit by bit. Like I said it’s still a new novel as of me writing my review, but so far it’s great. So keep up the great work author :)