Review Detail of Mtotheizow in Rise Online: Return of the Legendary Player

The premise of the story is very good but 36 chapters only covering 2 days of content makes reading the story feel extremly tedious. Also, the grammar just makes zero sense in a lot of parts (especially the dialogue) and completely ruins any sort of character interaction that happens. If the grammar and pacing get fixed then the outcome would be a top-tier novel my friend.