it has potential, it is a good idea but this is buried under a lot of other's works, the author is quite obviously a rookie. you can tell by author uploading the same chapter twice and not taking it down. But that is why author needs viewer ship who can try and help
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LIKEI will say thanks for pointing the thing out about the copied chapter thing. the first 15 chapters or so were reposted from other sites I was posting this story on. I'm not sure why you're referring to "the author" as if you're not addressing "the author" directly right now. I appreciate the comment, thank you for reading